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Page Type: SCP Article
Genre (Optional): Horror,
Page Layout (Optional): The page is laid out to create suspense as to how the SCP affects humans, hinting at what happens at the start, then building up suspense.
Elevator Pitch: An SCP that creates immortal entities that cannot move, condemned to a life of thinking…
Central Narrative: The piece is supposed to induce sadness within the reader, as they read about all these people who have been affected by the SCP, and how they can't move and have to live a life that never ends with just their thoughts, causing them to go insane.
Hook/Attention-Grabber: The SCP makes people immortal, but it ends up being detrimental to them.
Additional Notes: This is my first time. Please Give lots of feedback so I can improve.
ITEM #: SCP-XXXX
OBJECT CLASS: KETER
SPECIAL CONTAINMENT PROCEDURE: SCP-XXXX is to be contained within a standard humanoid containment cell, lined with lead. This inner containment cell should be suspended from the center of a larger containment cell that is approximately 250 meters by 250 meters by 250 meters. Mandatory cleaning procedures are required every 6 months; all instances of SCP-XXXX-3 are to be destroyed immediately. D-class subjects are to only have 10 minutes of exposure to SCP-XXXX when executing cleaning procedures.
SCP-XXXX-2 is to be contained within a standard humanoid containment cell. SCP-5978-2 containment class is safe.
In the case of a breach, SCP-XXXX is to be sedated with amnestic and moved back to containment. D-class personnel are to be used for sedation of the entity. All other personnel are to keep a safe distance until the entity has been removed, and a cleaning crew is required to remove any toxins within the air. Personnel are to only have 5 minutes of exposure to SCP-XXXX at any given point and are required to see a Doctor for inspection afterward, with bi-monthly check-ups for approximately 2 months.
Containment Procedure Update: (see Addendum XXXX-2) As of 02/09/2019, per the Ethics Committee orders, all instances of SCP-XXXX-2 are to either shot dead or injected with a lethal dosage. No exceptions.
Description: SCP-XXXX cannot be fully described due to its everchanging form. Approximately every 9 months, SCP-XXXX will shed all physical attributes, forming SCP-XXXX-3, and take on new physical attributes.
SCP-XXXX emits a potent toxin, capable of causing mild headaches, nausea and dizziness within minutes, and total body failure within approximately 20 minutes, creating an instance of SCP-XXXX-2. It has been observed that although SCP-XXXX-2 cannot move or feel anything, it still has functioning brain activity.
SCP-XXXX-2 is the collective term of subjects that have had 20 minutes or more of exposure to SCP-XXXX. SCP-XXXX-3 is the collective term of entities
Addendum 5978-1: Discovery
SCP-XXXX, SCP-XXXX-2, and SCP-XXXX-3 were first discovered in the town of ████, Australia on the 14/02/2015 when a portion of a town, approximately 128 persons, became instances of SCP-XXXX-2(1). All entities, including SCP-XXXX, were swiftly moved to site ██ and contained within a standard humanoid containment cell. Experiments were conducted during the following days on 3 of the contained SCP-XXXX-2.
Test XXXX-1 - 15/02/2015
Subject: SCP-XXXX-2 (1-29)
Procedure: An autopsy was conducted on SCP-XXXX-2 (1-29)
Results: Subject was immune to certain types of objects, including flame…
Analysis: Subject appears to be able to survive harsh environments. (Hint at ADDENDUM 3)
Addendum 5978-2: Incident 11/06/2017
During a containment breach on the 11/06/2017, 2 level 1 personnel and 6 level 2 personnel were infected with SCP-XXXX toxins, but only 1 level 1 personnel and 1 level 2 personnel became instances of SCP-XXXX-2, which were moved to a standard humanoid containment cell. All other subjects who were infected were taken into a lab for inspection but were cleared for duty approximately 7 days afterward.
Personnel included:
Dr. █████
Dr. ███
Dr. ████
Dr. ██████
Dr. █████
Dr. █████
Instances of SCP-XXXX-2 observed at the incident included:
Level 1 personnel Dr. ██████
Level 2 Personnel Dr. ████
Dr. ██████ (SCP-XXXX-2(2-1)) was interviewed shortly after the incident.
Interviewed: [SCP-XXXX-2 (2-1)]
Interviewer: Dr. ██████
Foreword: [An interview conducted to attempt to understand the effects of SCP-XXXX toxins. Observations of SCP-XXXX-2 (2-1) have shown that they have full brain functions, as well as fully functioning eyeballs and a partially functioning tongue and jaw.]
<Begin log>
Dr. ██████: Hello SCP-XXXX-2 (2-1). I am Dr. ██████, and I am here to interview about the incident containing you and SCP-XXXX on the 11th of the 6th, 2017. It is believed you have full functioning brain activities. Can you hear me?
SCP-XXXX-2 (2-1) shows no movement or signs of life.
Dr. █████: Alright. I've had an idea. SCP-XXXX-2 (2-1), when I ask a question, I want you to answer with your eyeballs. If your answer is "yes", then I want you to move your eyes up and downwards. If "no", side to side. If "other", or you're not sure, I want you to roll your eyes. Do you understand?
SCP-XXXX-2 (2-1) moves its eyeballs up and down, signing "yes".
Dr. █████: Awesome! Alright, I've got a few more questions for you, then we can… Nevermind. Can you feel anything? Your legs or your arms?
SCP-XXXX-2 (2-1) signs "no" by moving its eyeballs from side to side.
Dr. █████: Alright. And can you feel this?
Dr. █████ pokes SCP-XXXX-2 (2-1) with a standard biro pen. SCP-XXXX-2 (2-1) signs "no" with it eyeballs. Dr. █████ scribbles in her notepad.
Dr. █████: Cool. Can you move at all?
SCP-XXXX-2 (2-1) signs "no".
Dr. █████: Shame. That will be all then…
Dr. █████ huffs then looks at SCP-XXXX-2 (2-1).
Dr. █████: Alright well, in approximately 2 minutes you'll be moved to a standard humanoid containment cell. Tests will proceed afterward to decipher the extent of SCP-XXXX toxins effect. Thank you for your time SCP-XXXX-2 (2-1).
Dr. █████ stands up and leaves the incident scene.
<END LOG>
Closing statement: [SCP-XXXX-2 (2-1) was moved to a standard containment cell later that day, 11/06/2017, and further experimentation was continued the next day. All tests on SCP-XXXX-2 (2-1) and all other instances of SCP-XXXX-2 from incident XXXX-2 proved that SCP-XXXX-2 cannot move their physical body, and the entity cannot feel anything.]
Addendum XXXX-3
It has been observed, as of 02/09/2019, that SCP-XXXX-2 is Immortal of age. SCP-XXXX-2 will not age, at all. Per Ethics committee orders, all instances of SCP-XXXX02 are to be terminated through absolute destruction of the brain. No exceptions.
