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Hi! This is Ayers. I'll be commenting in purple. Remember to delete all purple text before rolling onto mainsite.
Alright, this is Ghij. I have made some changes around the article. Anything in orange will either be a annotation or a addition that I'm unsure of.
There's a couple of things we should think about since I'm not really happy with them:
- I would like the monster's effects to be more subtle, to the point where people doubt there is a monster. That way, going through the maps becomes more of an active task as the reader has to think "wait, 3 people just died because of [REASON]. That's… strange. Could there be more to this?"
- A more solid idea of the layout of this place. We can't develop the idea if we don't have the details.
| Item #: SCP-X | Level 4/X |
| Object Class: Uncontained | Classified |
The main entrance to Site-4 is buried below layers of rock, snow and ice.
Special Considerations for Procurement: To be completed. Just noting this is ACTUALLY unfinished. I think we should absolutely have something in here.
MTF-Omnicron-5 (left) en-route to Site-4's side entrance (right)
Description: SCP-X is an anomaly, or anomalies, thought to have been contained within Site-41 that have since escaped containment.
On 2007-09-13 Site-4's dead man's alert system was activated with no attached message. The Site did not respond to communications. MTF-Omnicron-5 "Jaybird"2 was dispatched to assess the situation.
I think we could discuss MTF-Omnicron-5 here and how they were assembled or go more indepth into their orders or something along those lines unless that sounds too cliche.
Further investigation is ongoing. I also think we need a little more in the description.
