The Thing From Site-4 (provisional title)

Hi! This is Ayers. I'll be commenting in purple. Remember to delete all purple text before rolling onto mainsite.

Alright, this is Ghij. I have made some changes around the article. Anything in orange will either be a annotation or a addition that I'm unsure of.

There's a couple of things we should think about since I'm not really happy with them:

  • I would like the monster's effects to be more subtle, to the point where people doubt there is a monster. That way, going through the maps becomes more of an active task as the reader has to think "wait, 3 people just died because of [REASON]. That's… strange. Could there be more to this?"
  • A more solid idea of the layout of this place. We can't develop the idea if we don't have the details.
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Item #: SCP-X Level 4/X
Object Class: Uncontained Classified

Threat Level: Undetermined

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The main entrance to Site-4 is buried below layers of rock, snow and ice.


Special Considerations for Procurement: To be completed. Just noting this is ACTUALLY unfinished. I think we should absolutely have something in here.
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MTF-Omnicron-5 (left) en-route to Site-4's side entrance (right)

Description: SCP-X is an anomaly, or anomalies, thought to have been contained within Site-41 that have since escaped containment.

On 2007-09-13 Site-4's dead man's alert system was activated with no attached message. The Site did not respond to communications. MTF-Omnicron-5 "Jaybird"2 was dispatched to assess the situation.

I think we could discuss MTF-Omnicron-5 here and how they were assembled or go more indepth into their orders or something along those lines unless that sounds too cliche.

Further investigation is ongoing. I also think we need a little more in the description.


Addendum 4440.1 — Annotated Map of Site-4




Addendum 4440.2 — MTF-Pi-40 'Pestilence'