Codysang ideas crit - SCP Sandbox III

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Codysang ideas crit

Seeking Greenlights: No

Page Type: SCP Article

Genre (Optional): Drama/Emotional (based around obsession)

Elevator Pitch:
someone becomes obsessed with someone (Venessa birwick) and keeps getting rejected then they make an anomalous object to prove how much they love Venessa.

Central Narrative: the scp in this story is a small mp3 player with the song (Im gonna be by the proclaimers) whenever anyone listens to the song they will walk to the wherever Venessa is until either their body gives out due to exhaustion or they make it to her. if they do make it to her they will try and win her over by any means necessary

Hook/Attention-Grabber: the recovery logs will develop the relationship between Venessa and the unnamed obsessed at first it'll start out like a normal friendship and it'll slowly turn into obsession until someone under control of the scp turns up at her location.

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