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Item #: SCP-8731

Object Class: Euclid

Special Containment Procedures: Simply transporting SCP-8831 into the facility strapped down to a vehicle or train.

Description: SCP-8731 is a 12x12 concrete room with nothing but a door going in and out of it, the concrete box has an ominous aura around it making it indestructible. Though seeming heavy, it is very lightweight and can be moved by simply strapping it to a truck or other vehicle.
From the outside, the inside of the room looks like the dream room of the person looking from the outside. It’s objective is to draw the person into its aura, once that person has entered the aura, the person suddenly feels the need to enter the room immediately, once the person has entered the door, the room will appear to be an empty concrete box again. The door will shut behind the person and it will not be re-openable until the person inside has died. Most subjects will die of starvation or dehydration, or other natural effects, however, it has been reported that some subjects kill themselves inside the box. After death, the body will mysteriously disappear. The whereabouts of the bodies are unknown.

Addendum: Every month, a procedure takes place in which a Class D personnel is sent in the box with a camera that has a rechargeable battery that has been amplified to last for one month to monitor the inside of the box.