DRSC143

I am working on my first SCP and I would like to see if it's good or not along with what people think of it before submitting it..
so here it is….

Item #: SCP-XXXX

Object Class: SAFE

Special Containment Procedures: SCP-XXXX is to be kept in a glass box with the glass being 25.4 mm thick. No one is to mess with or move SCP-XXXX alone and must be with one or more other person/people. When being moved to another foundation it must be sealed off from other living organisms and put in a tightly compacted container that is 63.5 mm thick.
If you see that SCP-XXXX is breached report it and try to keep your eye on it, do not touch SCP-XXXX!

Item Description: SCP-XXXX was found in lake ████████ in █████.
It appears to be made of lead mixed with iron and is slightly rusted with a circular hole 12.7 mm by 12.7 mm hole on it.
SCP-XXXX follows its victims while somehow not making a sound and it is seen waiting until the victim is sleeping or unconscious to begin sucking it up through the 12.7 mm by 12.7 mm hole,
usually starting with fingers or toes. The victim seems to be morphing into a liquid state as it is getting sucked up and doesn't seem to notice pain until they are awake.
SCP-XXXX when cracked seems to leak blood and other bodily fluids but the fluids cannot be traced to anyone and no DNA is found in them. After 5-12 hours depending on the damage of SCP-XXXX it is back to its original state and no damage is to be found on the object.
The fluids that leak or have leaked out of SCP-XXXX still remain to exist and they seem to be the only trace of SCP-XXXX being damaged.

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