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Hello, I am a beginner writer and I have just wrote my first SCP, I would like some feedback and critique! Thank you and enjoy!
Item #: SCP-XXXX (I don’t have a number)
Object Class: Euclid
Special Containment Procedures: Simply transporting SCP-XXXX into the facility strapped down to a vehicle or train.
Description: SCP-XXXX is a 12x12 concrete room with nothing but a door going in and out of it, the concrete box has an ominous, invisible aura around it making it indestructible. It is believed to be some kind of force field. Though seeming heavy, it is very lightweight.
From the outside, the inside of the room looks like the dream room of the person looking in from the outside. It’s objective is to draw the person into its aura, once that person has entered the aura, the person suddenly feels the need to enter the room immediately, once the person has entered the door, the room will appear to be an empty concrete box again.
The door will shut behind the person and it will not be re-openable until the person inside has died. Most subjects will die of starvation or dehydration, or other natural effects, however, it has been reported that some subjects kill themselves inside the box. After death, the body will mysteriously disappear. The whereabouts of the bodies are unknown.
The origins and reasoning behind SCP-XXXX is unknown, it was found in a remote field in Kenosha, Wisconsin. Multiple reports of people going in and never coming out of SCP-XXXX were made. After multiple reports, the foundation took action and were able to contain SCP-XXXX by strapping the cube onto a truck bed and escorting it to a proper containment in Area-██.
Addendum: Every month, a procedure takes place in which a Class D personnel is sent inside SCP-XXXX with a camera that has a rechargeable battery that has been amplified to last for one month to monitor the inside of the box.
