My second attempt at making an SCP, please be brutal.

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My second attempt at making an SCP, please be brutal.

This is my newest SCP, considering how my last SCP did I'm not expecting to do terribly well, but I figured I'd see if I could do better knowing what I know now. I will be replacing all X's with blanks with the exception of the SCP number. Besides that, I'd love to have suggestions and help fixing my errors.

:) thanks

Doc to SCP V
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1d3SgBfluEKocvGT0muGOnO32KV4jQldImTCnSUZH0A4/edit

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