SCP-209
Characters: D-Act, D-Prey 1, D-Prey 2
Story: D-Act describes it as sour and spicy.
Sour, D-Prey 1: D-Prey 1's skin begins to bubble. Lumps are formed under the skin, and begin to break through and pop. Oozing from them is a chunky, viscous lime green liquid, and is said to have reeked of decay. D-Prey 1 attempts to clog the lumps. The face of D-Prey 1 begins to melt, and subject screams. Its screams are drowned out by the green substance, and subject falls, convulsing. Subject expires from asphyxiation, the open sores, mouth, and other openings oozing the liquid.
Spicy, D-Prey 2: D-Prey 2's mouth literally catches on fire, burning its face. It attempts to extinguish the fire, screaming in the process. Its cries for help are cut off by the fire. Its shirt catches on fire, and it's obvious that its stomach and throat are also on fire. Spikes begin to form under subjects skin, and puncture through, spraying tiny amounts of blood. D-Prey 2 expires, and so do the flames. Subjects shirt has burned off, and its entire face, stomach, and throat are charred and melted.
D-Act smiles and applauds, complaining when they die. When both subjects expire, D-Act either tries to refill SCP-209 with the liquid expelled by D-Prey 1, self mutilates to fill it with its own blood, or attempts to breach to find a way to fill SCP-209. Either way, D-Act is terminated.
209 experiment log, where D-Act describes SCP-209 as "sour," and "spicy."
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Seeking Greenlights: yes
Page Type: Tale
Genre (Optional): Horror, Action
Page Layout (Optional): A typed description of a video log.
Heres the original file, by the way: SCP-209
Elevator Pitch: D-Act describes SCP-209 as sour and spicy, and the events that follow.
Central Narrative:
D-Prey 1 is affected by sour. It forms lumps under subjects skin, and burst. A chunky, green liquid oozes from them, and also through subjects mouth, choking it to death.
D-Prey 2 is affected by spicy. Its mouth, throat, and stomach catch on fire, and melt. Also, small spikes punture its skin. Its face, neck, chest, and stomach are charred.
D-Act smiles and applauds, and complains that they died so fast. It either tries to fill SCP-209 with the liquid expelled by D-Prey 1, mutilates itself to fill SCP-209, or attempts to breach to find a way to fill it.
Hook/Attention-Grabber: I think its interesting and fairly gorey, (I get more into detail in Sandbox,) and I think people would like it. I wish the original file had more experiment logs, so I added one.
Additional Notes: Any ways I could make it more original? Or end it in a different way?
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Alright, so its a guitar. Its plastic and small, a mini pink guitar for small children. The strings are plastic. The body itself is pink, and has white flower decals. The tuning pegs are little plastic flowers too. It has a small box inside of it, with seeds of the anomalous flower inside. When the guitar is played by a human, a seed is implanted in them by unknown means. The seeds do not grow in the ground, or when swallowed. Only when the guitar has been played.
Theres four stages, the onset is immediate, with the seed being implanted. The player doesnt feel anything, and the seed will die if the player stops playing. The second stage, the seed sprouts, and the roots are spread throughout the players stomach and digestive system. The player feels it a little bit, this also happenes within 3 minutes of onset. Cannot be stopped at this point. Third stage, the flowers fill up the players stomach and move up the throat and into the lungs, suffocating the player. The roots spread through the central nervous system. Fourth stage, the roots take over the brain and the flowers grow out of the skin. The whole human is basically covered in the flowers now, and is braindead. The flowers are sentient, and take over the human. As the flowers grow so fast, they shed off, and the instance eats them. The instance is not aggressive, and prefers to bumble around. Bees and butterflies are usually attracted.
The guitar was recovered after reports of a "living greenhouse," being spotted. A group of 6 players transformed themselves into instances inside of a greenhouse like dome, for unknown reason. It appears to be a cultish following though. The 6 instances now live in a greenhouse like cell in the foundation, and the guitar is in a standard storage locker. Classified as safe.
Tiny Kong, the murderer of bees. A small humanoid monkey, about 2 feet tall regularly, who is sapient. She can shrink, and float. Her brother, Chunky, was killed by bees, so now she is out to kill all the bees. Joke SCP.
ARTICLE:
Item #: SCP-XXXX
Class: Safe
Special Containment Procedures:
Description:
Addendum:
Interview Log XXXX-1
Interviewer: Dr. ████
Interviewee: SCP-XXXX
Foreword: SCP-XXXX is questioned on its background, and anomalous behaviors.
Structure: Dr asks Tiny about what she is, where she came from. Tiny yells about bees and letting her out to complete her mission. Dr asks about her "mission," and she tells them about Chunky and the bees. Her tale goes on about how Chunky was her best friend, then how he toyed with bees one day and got himself killed, and now has it out for the bees. Dr asks about Chunky's connection to her, Tiny explains how he was her brother.
Dr. ████:
SCP-XXXX:
Dr. ████:
SCP-XXXX:
Dr. ████:
SCP-XXXX:
Literally just Donald Trump. Ate too many orange's as a kid, became orange. Joke SCP.
Okay, so scratch that. We need to make it better. I liked the idea of the gashes… but make it something different. Add a story! Make it an object or an animal maybe? Make it a fruit grown on a tree by a person with anomalous abilities? Or make it a seed from another dimension? What would it do? 1 central gash sounds nice. Or maybe it was a slice from someone trying to eat it? "It makes you see perfection" or something like that. It brings you to something perfect, which in turn makes your life miserable and endless. But how would it not be perishable?
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actually i wanna continue on the original gashes story. A 5'6 humanoid being, with pale greenish skin, blonde shoulder length hair, and webbed hands, along with fin like elbows and ears, with gashes on appendages. Yellow eyes. No apparent sex.
When a human contacts the viscous substance oozing from the subjects gashes, they catch an infection. Only 65% of people who come into contact actually get infected. The infection itself lasts in a few stages. The infection resembles the brain decomposing.
Stage 1: Onset occurs within an hour of contact. The infected get a headache, and the place that came in contact becomes puffy and red.
Stage 2: About 30 minutes after onset. The headache evolves to a migraine, but the swelling of contact goes away. The migraine gets debilitatingly worse, and cracks in the infecteds skin begin to form. The infected's neck also goes stiff. Under MRI, it appears to be menengitis.
Stage 3: Right after stage two, lasts about 2 hours. Subject is immobile, and in immense pain, many do pass out from the pain. 30% can still vocalize, usually screaming. The gashes split open, secreting a mix of blood, rotting tissue, and the blood of the SCP. Brain appears to begin to necrotize.
Stage 4: The end. Subject becomes comatose, and dies. Brain is completely necrotic.
The story is in the interviewed. The interview stories take place where SCP was recovered, around stage 1 or 2 of the infection. Theres also an interview of a hospital worker.
Infection details: Non-communicable. The only way you catch it is through contact with the blood of the SCP. Can be cured by SCP-500.
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Scratch that. An ink that when splashed on paper, it shows something. Like… the ink itself was collected by a group of meteorites, the meteorites were found because pictures kept being drawn around crash sites and nobody knew why. It's sentient, and it communicates through it's pictures. It has a fixed color though, it just gets depth through light and vividness. Interviews would be cool with that one.
It'd be gold ink, and a redacted brand. The stories would tell of the eradication of its home planet.
EYEDROPS THAT MAKE YOU SEE INTO… either the future, someone elses eyes, into other worlds, or into perfection.
Im gonna go with it makes you see into other dimensions, and maybe make the logs like in the Dimension Hopper story. Those would be fun stories to make.
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