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Forum Crit

November 2020

A Medicinal Replicator for errorexe3

The Immortal Banana for brocklxrd

October 2020

Fairy Light for Raaor & Response

Therapist in the Candle for awsmlwsn

September 2020

no-signal Laboratory for Dominic Hammerson

Sentient Stalking Stop Sign for Quadraginta

The Gutter Gator for TheOstrich

I'm just slowing you down for ThrLiterateLad

The Rebirthing Woman for Artemiev

The White Fedora for dizzyyyyy

Protective Jumpsuit for DocOleJoeShimo

August 2020

Choose Your Own Autobiography!™ for ToastGoats

Internet Troll SCP for Epic man

Identity Theft for somekidbewack & Response

The Perfector for Mikaelious & Response

Forgiveness Over Permission for Dr John Silver

Dreams come true for Lukorios

Unconventional Reverse Time Capsule for Idontworkhere & Response

Hammerhead Lizard for theoneandonly245

unnamed for LBloxo

The Necklace of Harmonia for Meska

The Love Bug for Sotas

July 2020

The Crossroads for Harold Caztovski

Infinite Boredom for Professor Locke

Why are you doing this for theinuite

Operation KTE-7690-Blue Moreau for Captain Cold

Self-destructive kindness for forbiddenquest

Misguided Road Rage Stop Sign for Quadraginta & Response

I Blame Myself for RedOfPaw

June 2020

The Greed of Man for AltAcc

Murder Mistery Dinner for DarknessAwaits

An Arguing Manipulative Humanoid for DrLindemann

Anomalous Paper Oragami for AdsidTFD

extortion, guts, and a worm-thing in the sewer for ThisMightBeAuto

Lavender for RobbedACop

Beware of Dogs for Kenny Corvus

Remember What You Already Have for SuperPineapple7

Ethics of Anomalous Staff Members for TheSandwichMan

The redacted oil company for drosera88

The Hunting Saint for Candlelit

The Siren for Dr Loader

Dreams Can Come True for JaonHax

I must tend to the Chigs for Dr Langley

unnamed for locomotivefaox

Trust no one, Contain Everything for Captain Cold

what happens at the cabin stays at the cabin for grapesofwonder

May 2020

The Animator for Noplzmichael

The Adventures of Detective Moustache for Dr Sage Evergreen

To Lose What Was Once Yours for chiifu

unnamed -J for Dr Wile

Can't Stop the Party for Cerisehorror

The reconstructive feline humanoid for GlitchyPC

Pataphysical Activist for Ashton Hennessy

The One Seeking Omniscience for Garbage Bob

Subject-054 for jagdpenguin & Response

Suicidal Fungi for phohavewemet

Sir Skeleton for Eliminator_V5

Nostalgic Blade for Droxboy & Response

The Amethyst for richardtrle

The Marble Mother for Out_Of_Order_Id

Green —> Greenlight Given

Red —> Draft Crit

Site Crit

August 2020

SCP-5353/Who Knows for SamorotVex

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This is meant to be indescribable. Don't hate it if you don't understand it.

In fact, not understanding it is a perfectly valid reason to not like it.

This SCP delves into the classic "indescribable phenomenon" category. It's hard to pull off, but the excuse "it's meant to not make sense" isn't applicable. They should. That's how to tie a story together - even making some semblance of sense is… kind of the point for any form of narrative in literature. Throwing a bunch of paragraphs together that don't lead to anything meaningful isn't part of the act, it's just confusing.

There's nothing particularly of substance here - it's trying to hint at something meaningful but doesn't pull it off particularly well. What is it hinting at? Do you, the author, know the answer? I'd imagine the answer is no, and if I'm wrong, consider poking the idea through the blinds more.

July 2020

SCP-5038 for DL_Baryonyx

+ Transcript

Honestly, I can't say I enjoyed this. Conceptually, this article is not unworkable and can even be something special if done right. But the direction the narrative was taken and the numerous basic SPaG errors plaguing the piece made it hard to read.

Like, animal cars is an entertaining concept, but it really wasn't taken anywhere other than a National Geographic episode with cars in place of the animals. The incident log also didn't really go anywhere? Like, the narrative just felt like it was missing something as a whole. Like I said, it's an entertaining thought, but the execution wasn't able to hold my attention.

Even so, the numerous SPaG errors and the general unclinicality of the whole article, as well as the first image not being a good fit, dilutes any sort of enjoyment I had. (I also agree with ManyMeats on the description)

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Questions Desk

http://www.scpwiki.com/forum/t-13839206/taking-a-picture#post-4806314 28 Oct 2020

http://www.scpwiki.com/forum/t-13838187/draft-forum-etiquette#post-4805501 27 Oct 2020

http://www.scpwiki.com/forum/t-13828218/how-to-know-if-an-idea-was-already-made#post-4799927 19 Oct 2020

http://www.scpwiki.com/forum/t-13821437/monster-house#post-4797338 16 Oct 2020

http://www.scpwiki.com/forum/t-13806161/submission-process-troubles#post-4793494 11 Oct 2020

http://www.scpwiki.com/forum/t-13792027/help-for-a-newbie#post-4790149 6 Oct 2020

http://www.scpwiki.com/forum/t-13736066/my-first-article-general-questions#post-4776286 16 Sep 2020

http://www.scpwiki.com/forum/t-13700793/how-to-write-a-good-scp-hook#post-4767146 5 Sep 2020

http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-13695935/how-much-is-too-much-detail#post-4765455 2 Sep 2020

http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-13695898/help#post-4765435 2 Sep 2020

http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-13693946/image-text#post-4764722 2 Sep 2020

http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-13692327/asking-my-questions#post-4764345 1 Sep 2020

http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-13684096/about-the-custom-themes#post-4761339 28 Aug 2020

http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-13653298/i-need-advice-for-writing-an-scp#post-4750824 18 Aug 2020

http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-13650898/custom-themes 17 Aug 2020

http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-13627022/mtf-and-facilitys 7 Aug 2020

http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-13623043/two-scps#post-4740269 6 Aug 2020

05 Command

Non-Disc Record - Kazadure http://05command.wikidot.com/forum/t-13838864/non-disc-record-kazadure#post-4806031

Non-Disc Record - ChaosCodie http://05command.wikidot.com/forum/t-13710968/non-disc-record-chaoscodie#post-4771024

Non-Disc Record - dizzyyyyy http://05command.wikidot.com/forum/t-13695942/non-disc-record-dizzyyyyy#post-4765453

Non-Disc Record - Lordlimabean http://05command.wikidot.com/forum/t-13694219/non-disc-record-lordlimabean#post-4764811

Non-Disc Record - Jacobisbatman http://05command.wikidot.com/forum/t-13671360/non-disc-record-jacobisbatman#post-4757622

Useful Links

Guides

Guide Hub

http://www.scp-wiki.net/guide-hub

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How To Be Scary Without Saying Anything

http://www.scp-wiki.net/how-to-be-scary-without-saying-anything

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Let's Talk About Character for a Minute

http://www.scp-wiki.net/not-enough-characters

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Let's Talk About Writing Characters For A Minute

http://www.scp-wiki.net/let-s-write-characters

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So You Want to Write a Humanoid SCP Object

http://www.scp-wiki.net/so-you-want-to-write-a-humanoid-scp-object

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untitled essay regarding scps, narratives, and how they can share a page

http://www.scp-wiki.net/you-already-know-what-the-fuck-is-going-on

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Dr. Mackenzie's Common SCP Pitfalls

http://www.scp-wiki.net/mackenzie-pitfalls

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How To Get More Reviewers

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