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DATE: 19 Apr 2021 11:12
Item #: SCP-XXXX Xenia
Object Class: Safe
Special Containment Procedures: SCP-XXXX is to be contained in a 3.1x3.1 meter room with a 30x30cm coded clear bullet proof glass casing around SCP-XXXX. One armed guard is to be stationed outside of SCP-XXXXs containment unit to check personnel trying to enter wrists for SCP-XXXXs dragon marking. If no dragon marking is found or visible on the users wrist then they are to be prevented access to SCP-XXXXs containment cell. Only Foundation or D-Class with SCP-XXXXs dragon marking formed on their wrist are allowed to gain access to SCP-XXXX. CCV cameras are to be placed inside of SCP-XXXXs containment cell to monitor SCP-XXXX-1 and personal monitoring SCP-XXXX-1 are to note time stamps of when SCP-XXXXs arrives back inside of SCP-XXXX-1 and SCP-XXXX departs from SCP-XXXX-1. Incase of a SCP-XXXX-E1 or SCP-XXXX-E2 event occurs security is to enter SCP-XXXXs containment and intervene removing SCP-XXXX from its wearer. Security is then to carefully place SCP-XXXX back inside SCP-XXXX-1.
Description: SCP-XXXX is a ring band made of full diamond that’s 6.23x1.98cms in measurement. SCP-XXXX contains a neon blue dragon devouring its own tail engraved in the front of SCP-XXXX. SCP-XXXX is to placed inside of a small wooden ring box (here by known as SCP-XXXX-1) at all times. SCP-XXXX-1 is approximately 19cm of length containing a padding for SCP-XXXX to fit inside of it. SCP-XXXX seeks out people who is in most need of it and transmits a voice of the persons soulmate telepathically to the said person, telling them to put SCP-XXXX on. Once SCP-XXXX is picked up by the person it has chosen, SCP-XXXX then being to anomalously change it’s measurement to fit the wearers finger which shows to cause no apparent harm or discomfort to the wearer. A unremovable marking of a dragon devouring its tail (here by known as SCP-XXXX-2) then forms on their right wrists when SCP-XXXX as fully been fitted to the wearer. The wearer then hears a unbodied voice of their soulmate inside of their head (here by known as SCP-XXXX-3) guiding them where they can find the person behind the voice of which is their soulmate. The subject also seems to feels urges to find their soulmate even more while having heighten senses and the urge to complete their dreams and life goals as they search for their soulmate. SCP-XXXX-2 and SCP-XXXX-3 both act as a guide to helping the wearer to find their soulmate. SCP-XXXX-3 begins getting louder but not defying the wearer, the closer they get to their soulmate. SCP-XXXX-2 begins to devour its own tail the closer the wearer gets to finding their soulmate. Once the wearer finds their said soulmate SCP-XXXX-2 will have then fully devoured itself and SCP-XXXX-3 which has been reported by wearers to say “You found them, congratulations” then SCP-XXXX-3 will then completely stop talking. Under the circumstances that the wearers soulmate is deceased or married SCP-XXXX-3 will speak to that persons soulmate as if it’s their own self consciousness guiding them to find the wearer. Once the wearer and their soulmate meet SCP-XXXX-3 no longer guides the soulmate instead leaving them to their own choices. If the said persons soulmate is deceased then SCP-XXXX will then begin to fill the wears thoughts and memories with that of their soulmates, giving the wearer a feeling as if they known and have been with their soulmate their whole life. SCP-XXXX then gives the wearer hope and motivation to live out their life’s for their soulmates. There appears to be no negative effect after this event that has been recorded. SCP-XXXX disappears from the wear along side SCP-XXXX-2 and SCP-XXXX then reappears back inside of SCP-XXXX-1 after any of these events take place. If in a rare circumstance that a person that SCP-XXXX hasn’t chosen attempts to place SCP-XXXX on their finger then one of two events will occur. Event one SCP-XXXX will decrease in size around the non chosen persons finger while SCP-XXXX-3 then seems to manifest during this event filling the non chosen wearers head with terror and can be heard shouting in a deep pitched voice that “We will cut off your blood circulation!”until SCP-XXXX is removed from the wearers finger. Its to be noted that SCP-XXXX-2 doesn’t form during this event. In event two, SCP-XXXX grows to large for the wearers finger causing SCP-XXXX to not fit the persons finger. During this SCP-XXXX-3 then manifest and begins speaking in a firm tone of voice “This ring isn’t for you, for you were not chosen” stopping only when SCP-XXXX is carefully placed back inside of SCP-XXXX-1. People who have worn SCP-XXXX or witnessed any of its anomalous properties have no recollection of their encounters with SCP-XXXX and it’s anomalous properties instantly after SCP-XXXX and SCP-XXXX-1 and SCP-XXXX-3 have disappeared and reappeared back inside SCP-XXXX-1. The wearer does have a feeling of thankfulness for SCP-XXXX but they express no signs of knowing what SCP-XXXX is. SCP-XXXX has no known range limit on finding someone to chose. The furthest range has tested to be 100km. Nor does SCP-XXXX have any known limit to helping the people of its choosing towards being United with their soulmate. SCP-XXXX also seems to choose all people no matter gender or sexuality. SCP-XXXX has previously “chosen” a female researcher, a male of homosexual sexuality and a female who’s soulmate is deceased (check experiment logs for more information). It’s to be understood that if no personal within the Foundation Facility is chosen by SCP-XXXX , SCP-XXXX will disappear from SCP-XXXX-1 (by means the Foundation doesn’t understand yet) and find someone that it has chosen. SCP-XXXX will then reappear back inside SCP-XXXX-1 after it has united its chosen person to their soulmates. Time spans of which SCP-XXXX has remain gone from SCP-XXXX-1 range from 2 month, 8 months, 1 year and 5 months.
Addendum: SCP-XXXX is rumoured to have been blessed by witches of seven tribes. SCP-XXXX then was passed down by the witches to a family of mortals whom go by the name “The Labonairs” which of whom seemed to all have died making SCP-XXXXs loyalty to The Labonairs stop. SCP-XXXX started craving other human contact for which lead to SCP-XXXX coming into SCP Foundation custody after a member of The Foundation known as Dr.[REDACTED], found SCP-XXXX and SCP-XXXX-1 in the backseat of her car on April ██ ██18. After Dr.[REDACTED] placed SCP-XXXX on her finger she instantly found out about SCP-XXXXs anomalous properties after being filled with motivation and hope to find her soulmate and to complete her life goals and dreams. Dr.[REDACTED] then walked into Site ██ handing the ring box to one of the researchers at Site ██ after 3 months SCP-XXXX was reported to be back inside of SCP-XXXX-1. After giving SCP-XXXX-1 to the Foundation Dr[REDACTED] was imminently interviewed. (Check below for interview)
Interview with Dr.[REDACTED] Begin Log, April 2 2020
Dr. Mitchell: hello Doctor, so if I may how did you come across SCP-XXXX and it’s anomalous properties?
Dr.[REDACTED]: I just found it in the backseat of my car after which I started hearing voices telling me to put SCP-XXXX on so I did and that’s how I became aware of its anomalous properties. After which I turned the ring box into Foundation custody.
Dr. Mitchell: I see, so what convinced you to take the ring?
Dr.[REDACTED]: I’m professional, I work for The SCP Foundation after all. But I couldn’t help to find my soulmate but I knew I had to give the ring box to The Foundation before I did any of it.
Dr. Mitchell gets up off of his chair and thanks Dr.[REDACTED] for her time.
End Log
Begin Log, April 23, 2020
Interview with a male who has worn SCP-XXXX.
Dr. Mitchell: Good evening, so what did you experience when wearing SCP-XXXX?
████: It was empowering and motivational feels that the ring gave me.
Dr. Mitchell: could you elaborate please?
████: It was giving me this super urge “for say”, for me to want to find my soulmate along side complete my goals and dreams. The ring helped me find out who I really am.
Dr. Mitchell: Go on ████.
████: See I didn’t know I was gay until that ring found me. That ring guided me across the seas to Yorkshire Northern England to find that my soulmate is a guy. We hit it off right off the back.
Dr. Mitchell: I see, well then thank you ████ your time. If you would please follow the security guard out.
End Log
Interview with ████. Begin Log, 1 May 2021
Dr. Mitchell: Good Morning ████, now if you don’t mind I’m a ask you some question regarding the SCP-XXXX. What happened when you put SCP-XXXX on and how did you find out your soulmate was deceased.
████: When I put the ring on I instantly know about my soulmates passing.
Dr. Mitchell: Can you elaborate?
████: I can’t explain it I just know somehow.
Dr. Mitchell. Then what happened after that?
████: My mind and every thought started being filled with memories of my soulmate. I sen their face, I seen their smile, I seen everything about them. I known them my whole life. After I got this and well I still do have this urge that’s hungry for me to life my life out in happiness for my soulmate.
████ becomes emotional and starts crying
Dr. Mitchell: I’m sorry for your lost. Would you mind following security out please.
End Log
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DATE: 19 Apr 2021 10:58
| Assigned Site | Site Director | Research Head | Assigned Task Force |
| Site-74 | Poppy Sulyvahn | Ernest Kissinger | Sigma-16 |
Special Containment Procedures:
SCP-XXXX is to be placed in a locked standard storage locker in Dir. Sulyvahn's office in Site-74. As testing is currently ongoing, it is to be removed at the discretion of Dr. Lawrence. Applications for recreational staff use are currently indefinitely suspended.
Description:
SCP-XXXX is an anomalous machine, supposedly manufactured by Group of Interest 'Dr. Wondertainment.' The device is composed of a single analogue screen and attached keyboard, bearing signs of frequent use. A large, red button labelled ‘on’ is also present, in replacement of where the ‘tab’ key would normally be on a standard QWERTY keyboard. No external connection ports for wires are present on the device; and ultrasound scans have revealed that it is, in fact, completely hollow; and lacking any internal machinery. Even if unplugged, SCP-XXXX maintains power, and, thus far, has remained in a state of visually appearing ‘on’ ever since its retrieval. As of 3.12.202█, a way to turn the machine off has yet to be found.
When in an inactive state, the machine will display the following:
DR. WONDERTAINMENT PRESENTS: THE PREFIXINATORtm!
Please input your chosen BASE OBJECT here!
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Please input your chosen PREFIX here!
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DR. WONDERTAINMENT ltd. is not legally culpable for the death, harming, mind-wiping, obliteration, eternal damnation, or calcification of any person/persons using this recreational product.
If the name of any nearby object is input into the first box, and a valid1 prefix in the second, the object will temporarily demanifest before reappearing in the same location with the relevant prefix applied to it. At this point, the object is classified as an instance of SCP-XXXX-α.
Under certain circumstances, SCP-XXXX may instead reject the target object, and display one of several error messages. It appears that, for some prefixes, SCP-XXXX requires an ambient 'context' for what affect is intended to be applied. See Experiment log 1.0 for more detail.
Recovery:
SCP-XXXX was recovered from a Marshall, Carter & Dark storehouse along with multiple other anomalous objects in a standard raid conducted on 1.22.201█.
Recovered Documentation:2
| SH493/G8RI3/P4TI8 | |
|---|---|
| Status | Renting |
| Demand | High |
| Value | Dependent on Customer Request |
| Availability | Unique |
| Identifier | Prefix Application Machine |
| Description | Item is an analogue machine capable of applying any theoretical prefix to any given object. When turned on, it will prompt the user to type in the name of their chosen target object, and said prefix. It will then apply the prefix to the target object. |
| Marshall, Carter and Dark, LLP | |
| Rental Record 01 | |||
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| SH493/G8RI3/P4TI8 | |||
| Name | Date | Period | Comments |
| Elias Kachouba | June 7, 2014 | N/A | //Initial owner of the item. Sold to an associate, who then relinquished it into MC&D property as a payment for an unrelated debt. |
| Molly Pelligrins | January 16, 2016 | 1 Day | Used render an area of space in their home imperceptible to humans. |
| Andreas Bloor | September 13, 2016 | 1 Day | Used to make a common meat chicken highly poisonous. |
| John Gabriel | June 22, 2017 | 1 Day | Used to give themself a third kidney. |
| John Gabriel | June 28, 2017 | 1 Day | Used to give themself a fourth kidney. |
| George Wigg | July 16, 2017 | 1 Day | Used to transform one golden buddha statue into four identical smaller buddha statues. |
| Sidney Swift | December 23rd, 2017 | 1 Day | Used to make themselves 45cm taller. |
| John Gabriel | December 25th, 2017 | 1 Day | Used to give themself a third kidney. It is unclear what happened to the other two that were acquired via the usage of the item. |
| George Wigg | December 32nd, 2017 | 2 Days | Used to add one additional day to the calendar year. |
| Marshall, Carter and Dark, LLP | |||
| Memo 028 | |||
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| SH493/G8RI3/P4TI8 | |||
| Sender | S. Ruttan | Recipient | P. Keybrook |
| Heya Penny, Just letting you know that the Wondertainment machine has been taken off the shelves temporarily after what that George guy did to last year. The skippers noticed, and they're pissed, I think- at least, that's what the higher-ups said, so we're gonna have to reconsider what exactly we let the clients do with it in future. Sorry about the inconvenience, I know you enjoyed working with this particular product. We can organise where we're storing it later- over lunch, maybe? Thanks, Shayne |
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| Marshall, Carter and Dark, LLP | |||
Experiment Log:
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DATE: 18 Apr 2021 21:12
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DATE: 18 Apr 2021 21:03
…
“Huh?” You said as you awoke from your deep slumber in what looked like a foundation hallway.
You feel the urge to look around, but you just stood up and hid in the hallway. You see a person in a strange uniform with a badge that you have never heard of, it reads ‘TARTARUS INC. RANK D RESEARCHER-‘, but you don’t see the name. After everyone left the hallway, you decided to enter a security office beside you, you could see the following on a terminal:
TartarOmega Computer Terminal ver. 15.42.9
PLEASE LOGIN WITH YOUR CREDENTIALS TO ACCESS THE TERMINAL
ID:
PASSWORD: __
“Dang it, I don’t know anything-“ You then realized something and look in a cabinet, you found a badge of a security officer, you decided to use it
You then saw a screen, asking you to view a containment class, you don’t remember what you chose, but then you heard the door slam open, then you blacked out, before even realizing what was happening.
You woke up a few hours later in the same hallway you woke up in before. You seed red lights flashing, and you hear screaming. You didn’t have a limb at that moment, but it was only a finger.
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DATE: 18 Apr 2021 19:33
Item #: SCP-XXXX
Object Class: Save
Special Containment Procedures: SCP-XXXX might be contained in a special box built by armoured titanium plates, the box counts with a special gel to cushion any type of fall or impact
Description: SCP-XXXX looks like a standard Hard Drive Disk of the manufacture █████, more specific looks like the model ██████ of 1TB of capacity and color black, different tests suggest the capacity of the disk might be between ███████ and ███████
The differences between the standard model and SCP-XXXX are:
- The indicators light never turn of when the disk was disconnected from a pc
- A tag attached to the cable of the disk written in a strange language
- A little but perpetual vibration produced by the internal components
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DATE: 18 Apr 2021 16:35
1. Image of SCP-5847's obsidian handle
Item #: SCP-5847 "The Inveigling Bulwark"
Object Class: Safe
Clearance Level Required: 2
Special Containment Procedures: SCP-5847 is to be kept within a secure room with a larger than five metres radius. The room must only be accessible via two key cards being inserted at once. This ensures that there is an extra person to help in the situation in the off chance one gets corrupted via SCP-5847
Description: SCP-5847 is a six foot tall riot shield made of dark black tinted glass. The glass appears to be see through only via the back of the shield. To persons looking into the shield they will only see pure blackness. The handle of SCP-5847 is made of pure obsidian yet much like the glass it appears to be indestructible. SCP-5847 emits an aura within five metres of it that entices people to equip the shield and block the nearest doorway. The shield can only corrupt one person at a time and the subject will not part with SCP-5847 unless forcibly having it removed from them. If the wielder of the shield is threatened they will use the shield as a weapon to kill any attackers. If the shield wielder remains unchallenged then they will continue blocking the doorway until eventually dying from dehydration. If the wielder has no access to any doorways then they will walk around in confusion until succumbing to death via dehydration.
Notes The foundation currently believes the glass and handle of SCP-5847 to be indestructible. Through multiple tests including firing a ballistic missile at the shield, no damage could be seen. The foundation will try and cross test with various SCPs to discover if SCP-5847 can be damaged by anomalous effects. It appears the wielder of SCP-5847 need no sleep yet still suffer the consequences of sleep deprivation.
Footnotes
1.Amnestics must be used on anyone in proximity to SCP-5847. The foundation is currently unaware how long the effects of SCP-5847 last on an individual so amnestics are to be used at all times unless the lead researcher prohibits it..
Licensing
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DATE: 18 Apr 2021 12:17
WARNING!
ANY NON-AUTHORIZED PERSONNEL ACCESSING THIS FILE WILL BE IMMEDIATELY TERMINATED THROUGH BERRYMAN-LANGFORD MEMETIC KILL AGENT. SCROLLING DOWN WITHOUT PROPER MEMETIC INOCULATION WILL RESULT IN IMMEDIATE CARDIAC ARREST FOLLOWED BY DEATH.
YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.
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SCP-5732 out of captivity whilst reading a book
Special Containment Procedures: SCP-5732 shall be contained in a 12" x 10" x 12" glass box at Site 59 with a small door and air-holes for SCP-5732 to breathe. SCP-5732 is to be fed 4 fish and 3.5 liters (7/8 gallons) of water served in a square bowl everyday. (differs on Fridays, shall SCP-5732 be fed with 5 fish and 5 liters (1 1/4 gallons) of water) Shall SCP-5732 be breached or escaped, call Dr. Charles Anborough MTF Gamma-6 ("Deep Feeders") or MTF Epsilon-11 ("Nine-Tailed Fox") to retrieve SCP-5732. Shall the re-containment fail, go into immediate lockdown in the bomb shelter at site B and activate the controlled warhead to neutralize the Post-AK class scenario.
Description: SCP-5732 is a Leopard Pinniped pillow of an unknown brand or producer. SCP-5732 is sentient and quite intelligent, with an intellectual quotient test for SCP-5732 showing it's IQ is significantly higher than the average Leopard Pinneped with a score of 170. SCP-5732 has shown signs of life and regeneration of the internal organs, such as the heart, in mere seconds.
Psychological manipulation of SCP-5732 is serious and unavoidable, as well as being able to commit an AK-class scenario from delirium.
When in a 48-inch (4 foot) radius of SCP-5732, Class-D personnel have reported feeling severe dopamine hormones rushing in their bloodstream, and on rare occasion severe adrenaline rushes have been reported, with severe energy spotted in otherwise normal activities for Class-D personnel.
Addendum: SCP-5732 was first discovered in 3/21/21, then reported to the SCP Foundation after it was reported a woman was suffering from severe delirium and commit suicide 20 minutes later. First experiment with Class-D personnel 1875 did not turn out good, he felt a huge surge of dopamine and adrenaline inside of his brain neurons, fatally killing him out of insanity and delirium episodes. All further experiments must be verified by O5 personnel. SCP-5732's first breach in 4/17/21, a day before an interview was conducted with SCP-5732 from Dr. Charles Anborough, where Dr. Charles supposedly breached SCP-5732 in an attempt to give SCP-5732 fish, specified by his request in the interview.
Interviews :
Interviewed: SCP-5732
Interviewer: Dr. Charles Anborough
Foreword: I have a odd feeling from this interview, some bad foreshadowing maybe.
<Begin Log, 4/18/21 >
Dr. Charles Anborough So, SCP-5732, how are you feeling
SCP-5732: I want fish
Dr. Charles Anborough Alright, how are you even sentient, you're a pillow!
SCP-5732: Fish, please
Dr. Charles Anborough Woah, I suddenly feel amazing! Haha!
SCP-5732: barks
Dr. Charles Anborough Come with me!
Dr. Charles then proceeds to breach SCP-5732.
<End Log>
Closing Statement: Oh god, this is bad. WHERE ARE NINE TAILED FORCES? WE-
Foundation power outage, unlocking captivity of all SCP's keter and over, causing lockdown in the bomb shelter and activating the controlled warhead
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DATE: 18 Apr 2021 09:52
DISCLAIMER: This critique is coming from someone who knows nothing about bees.
SCP-XXXX is currently being contained inside its original discovery site since it poses no threat to the population at large.
SCP-XXXX is contained at its location of discovery. (Btw, what is with the inclusion of "since it poses no threat to the public at large"? If it was a threat, would the Foundation just take it to their facilities? The foundation only contains an object at the location of its discovery if they have no other choice)
Foundation front is to be built1.
Has been built.
the event of civilian questioning
Remove " a"
Dr Cole, head researcher of the SCP-XXXX project, is currently piloting F.A.R.
Unless it is extremely important, I don't think the Foundation would need one specific guy to be controlling a robot.
SCP-XXXX has been infiltrated, with a
Replace "with" with "utilizing". Remove the comma too.
the only difference being anomalous dimensional warps at each corner of SCP-XXXX
With the sole differentiation of two-dimensional ellipsoid rifts at each corner of SCP-XXXX.
SCP-XXXX-1 are the attendants/employees of SCP-XXXX, managing entry and exit schedules, and offering services to guests. These instances are of our own current timeline/dimension.
Ngl Cole, I got 0% clue about what you're trying to say here. If they are bees, just say they're bees and what do you mean by "of our own current timeline/dimension"?
SCP-XXXX-2 are different variants of the regular honeybee,
SCP-XXXX-2 is the collective designation for variations of regular honey bees
Also, how does the Foundation know if they are in different timelines whilst different dimensions cuz I'm a little confused right now.
SCP-XXXX-2-1 looks similar to SCP-XXXX-1, the feature differentiating it being a pair of mandibles, not dissimilar to an ant of the Camponotus spp4 variant.
SCP-XXXX-2-1 appears similarly to SCP-XXXX-1, with the sole differentiation of it be a pair of mandibles. (The rest I don't understand, primarily because I know nothing about ants. You can add the rest if you want)
uses a form of telekinesis to hover
Utilizes telekinesis as a form of levitation.
plants look as if they are derivative from an original plant from our current dimension. These have been given the SCP-XXXX-3 designation.
Just say they look like plants of an unknown species cuz I was confused when I first read this. For the designation part, replace the full stop with "and has been designated as SCP-XXXX-3".
Speaking of destinations, replace all of the last parts of them (I.e 2-1, 2-2, 2-3) with 2-A, 2-B and 2-C. It makes it less confusing to determine the specific designations.
This variant has
SCP-XXXX-3-A possess
This variant has a thicker root. It subsides
This variant possesses a thicker root and it subsides
which has caused many trees to perish in the area.
Which caused many trees to neutralise in the area
The following is written by what F.AR could observe.
The following log describes observations taken from F.A.R.
assuring that criminal or terrorist acts will not take place.
What kind of criminals or terrorists would take place in a beehive? Now, Cole, I know before you decide to remove this part all because I questioned it, I want you to take a step back and ask yourself, "Who would go after these bees, besides the Foundation and GOC? Why do they care and what are they trying to achieve?"
(So Rose, what are your overall thoughts?)
I felt bored because there's just nothing that hooks me. 90% of what the article tells me is that it's just an extra-dimensional hive filled with bees that make no sense. That's it.
It doesn't use the bees/baskets mentioned in some way, it doesn't try to tell the reader a story using these bees, it just tells me what they are, what they do and that's it. It would pretty much be the same without them. There's no narrative, either.
I guess the project addition added some level of purpose since it was used to see the hive and the incident but that's it. I'm not sure if it would be the same if F.A.R was created or not, either.
I don't see what the bees would care if the tickets are legitimate or not. Like, do they have rivals that want to overthrow their settlement? Do they have a history of encountering spies? If so, that would be a good start to adding a narrative. I don't even know what the tickets are for, either.
I'm going to use 4011 as an example of what a settlement is with its characters. SCP-4011 is an abandoned Foundation site on Mars, inhabited by robots. These robots mostly protect/look acter they're settlement and despite who it's created from, the Foundation never knew they made it. (I strongly recommend that you read it to get a better of idea of how to create a settlement)
If you are going to come up with a narrative, I'd suggest removing the baskets and flowers since they feel unnecessary UNLESS they add something to the narrative your thinking of.
I also recommend you try and take your time to flesh out your article a bit; read what other articles have, come up with ideas that will improve it, figure out what other purposes do the bees serve other than just mentioning them, characterise the bees, tell a story, do something.
Btw, I hope you do well in the future. Good luck, man. I know deep down you can do it.
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DATE: 18 Apr 2021 07:34
SCP Project 1: Alien Interstellar Cruise Ship
Level Clearance: 1
Containment Class: Safe
Disruption Class: Dark
Risk Class: Notice
Special Containment Procedures:
SCP XXXX is contained approximately 50ft (15m) from Aquatic Site 4-I. Due to the size of SCP XXXX relocation has been deemed impractical and thus Aquatic Site 4-I was constructed to house it. All civilian and nation sponsored research into the sea floor near Aquatic Site 4-I must be either co-opted by Foundation personnel in order to protect the security of Aquatic Site 4-I or be shut down entirely. If all else fails amnestics are to be applied to any expressing interest in the 4-I area of the sea floor. SCP XXXX itself requires no additional securing to keep it contained. Floodlights must be pointed at SCP XXXX during research expeditions to it, to aid with visibility.
Researcher’s wanting to initiate new investigations into SCP XXXX must first get approval from Aquatic Site 4-I’s current overseer. Expedition teams going into or around SCP XXXX must have at least 2 foundation certified divers with them. These 2 individuals are responsible for ensuring the safety of all other members during any expedition. Any undocumented damage observed on SCP XXXX is to be reported upon return to Aquatic Site 4-I. An immediate investigation is to done into the origin of the damage and whether it is recent or not. If damage is concluded to not be a part of incident XXXX-1a/1b then it is to be repaired as soon as possible. Regular inspections are to be carried out on the structural integrity of SCP XXXX every month and repairs are to be made accordingly. Failure to ensure so by on site overseer will result in demotion.
Description:
SCP XXXX, otherwise known as the SS. Deliciae, is a large 200,000 tonne interplanetary vessel of extraterrestrial origin intended for leisure trips around it’s home star system. After being ejected from it’s own star system an estimated 75,000 years ago SCP XXXX drifted through interstellar space before being caught by the influence of our sun and eventually colliding with the Earth. Evidence of this event was discovered by Professor Aldane in Adi Selam, Ethiopia. Two clay tablets were discovered (see artefact report 1) during an archaeological survey of the Ethiopian, Semien Mountains. They depicted a god-like entity falling from the heavens and splitting the sky in two before shaking the ground so violently that a mountain fell in upon itself. Upon the discovery of this tablet Foundation scientists began an investigation themselves into the area, to ensure that the tablets were not depicting real events. After the discovery of further evidence (see artefact report 2) that indicated this supposed god fell into the Indian Ocean a survey of the Indian Ocean floor began. This led to the eventual discovery of SCP XXXX in quadrant 4-I and then the construction of Aquatic Site 4-I to contain it. It is the current leading theory that the god depicted in tablets XXXX-1 – 5 mistook SCP XXXX entering the atmosphere and colliding with the Indian Ocean floor as a god falling to earth.
Onboard SCP XXXX are a vast array of technologies already familiar to established Foundation knowledge having to do with interplanetary travel. However the cultural artefacts and corpses preserved onboard SCP XXXX are entirely unique. As of the time of the writing of this report there have currently been 15 preserved corpses found as well as 45 physical unique cultural artefacts. As well as digital copies of reports and logs taken by the crew of SCP XXXX. While the cultural artefacts and corpses give an insight into the culture and biology of this unknown extraterrestrial race, the logs and reports give us an insight into how SCP XXXX came to be in our system. Thanks to the book keeping of the now deceased Captain of SCP XXXX the series of events that brought SCP XXXX to the Indian Ocean are made quite clear. These reports however are in the native language of this race. Any translation further along in this report are the best approximations researchers could arrive at.
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