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DATE: 29 Apr 2021 01:49

One of your modules doesn't work, as I'm sure you're aware.

The opening RAISA warning is too casual, make it sound formal.

Don't include a smiley face in the message, add after that there was a crude 'happy face' carved after the message.

Add more than "this is theorized to connect to SCP-6000"

There wouldn't be a dash between 0.5 and meter

You didn't replace SCP-XXXX-A with SCP-6000-A

I feel you mislabeled these different components. When you classify something as SCP-XXXX-A, -B, or -C for example. In my experience those are reserved for specific components of a whole, such as a single individual. I'll give an example below.

SCP-XXXX-A is a man who can open portals into other dimensions. SCP-XXXX-B would be his cane, which he uses to create the portals.

Also in my expeirence, classifying somehting as SCP-XXXX-2, or -3, is to group a larger collection of individuals. I'll also give an example below.

SCP-XXXX is a woman who can create bunnies when she pulls them out of her hat. Those bunnies would be classified as SCP-XXXX-2.

Also if I misunderstand this system, please feel free to tell me.

You say the SCP-6000-C can stop the SCP-6000-B from dying, but you should go into more detail on this.

Wait wait wait. So this tree sprouted from the ground, and these people were trapped inside. So the MTF just said "Yeah whatever" and left them in there?? Yeah it caused heavy damage to the roof, but that's not even close to dangerous for the MTF.

You introduce this new MTF, MTF Lambda-1, but you don't actually describe what they do. You should add a footnote briefly detailing what they do.

I feel like the interview is kinda crlunky. Either re-write bits of the SCP-6000-C's dialogue or extend the interview to have SCP-6000-C leaving the interview or something like that.

Addendum 2 is a bit off, all the text just kinda clumped together. Either add dividers or add larger gaps in between the text.

Wait you're introducing another Lambda-1? Why?

The nickname would have parentheses around it: Armed Command Battalion Lambda-1 ("God's Children")

Dr. Thervene wouldn't be referred to as Dr. Cole in the interview log transcript. SCP-6000 could mention his name, but his title in the transcript should be Thervene.

(Also a side note, Thervene is a cool name)

Small detail, but when you get Thervene to say "Get the paramedics, check on them." you should say instead:

Dr. Thervene: [Talking to Project Head Insert Name) Get the paramedics, check on them.

I like how you end that transcript as well, very good stuff.

I also just noticed this. In the pre-interview description, you don't add the period to Dr.

Your link to SCP-990 is messed up and doesn't work.

Utilizes is spelled incorrectly in Addendum.6000.3

I feel like Dr. Dre is on the cusp of me not liking his writing. He swears a lot and while I get his frustrations I don't think he should swear that much.

You call Dr. Dre both Dr. Dre and Dr. Smith. I thought Dre was his last name, you should make that more apparent.

You say "This bitch almost took killed everyone there" in the interview, make sure to delete either killed or took.

In the final revision the ACS is a bit off, either change it slightly or keep it there as it is.

The ending is a bit meh, it's alright. It doesn't strike me with any emotion.
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DATE: 29 Apr 2021 01:37

rating: 0+x

NOTICE FROM THE FOUNDATION RECORDS AND INFORMATION SECURITY ADMINISTRATION

This document has been noted to contain explicit descriptions of transmisia, transphobia, ableism, physical, emotional and verbal abuse, self-harm and body mutilations.

— Maria Jones, Director, RAISA



Item #: SCP-XXXX

Object Class: Safe1

Special Containment Procedures: SCP-XXXX is to be kept in standard humanoid containment at Site-83's Medical Wing. SCP-XXXX’s eyes must always have protective coverings to halt the growth of bacteria. SCP-XXXX is to be fed intravenously a mixture of nutrients and morphine and its medical pans cleaned thrice daily. The object's skin must be moisturized daily. As of writing SCP-XXXX hasn't indicated any signs of higher cognitive functions aside from reactions to basic stimuli. Due to Incident-XXXX.2 minor fluctuations in SCP-XXXX's cognitive functions were detected2.

Description: SCP-XXXX is a 55 year old white, female, humanoid mannequin. The anomaly is unable to move its body. It is unable to move or close its eyes and a custom pair of protective lenses have been built to prevent gangrene and halt the progression of its cataracts. The only functions that move independently are its circulatory, nervous, digestive, respiratory systems. SCP-XXXX's skin is desiccated, dry and frequently cracks and bleeds if not moisturized.

SCP-XXXX is sentient and will only react to basic stimuli such as light and sound. Brain scans on SCP-XXXX show that it is incapable of higher-cognitive functions and the ability to process language. As of Incident-XXXX.1 it is conjectured that SCP-XXXX is able to process auditory language.

Stimuli Reactions
D-47382 Subject was asked to move SCP-XXXX's arms up horizontal to the anomaly's shoulder. (T-Pose)
Protocol DATA HERE
Results DATA HERE
Stimuli Reactions
D-54893 SCP-XXXX is hooked up to an EKG (???). Subject was instructed to shine a flashlight into the anomaly's eyes.
Protocol DATA HERE
Results DATA HERE
Stimuli Reactions
D-59040 Subject was asked to use an airhorn next to the anomaly's ear.
Protocol DATA HERE
Results DATA HERE

Incident-XXXX.1

On 21/08/02 researchers Davis and Leary were discussing the updated protocols for PoI-XXXX's surveillance. Researcher Leary had forgotten to mute the containment room's PA and as such SCP-XXXX was privy to the researchers' conversation. The brain scanner that was hooked up to the anomaly spiked drastically and video feed caught more liquid than usual clearing out of SCP-XXXX's tear ducts via tube. <- (i am very much not sure if this is a good way to approach them finding out she is still sapient)

Since the incident researchers try to verbally communicate with SCP-XXXX. At the moment SCP-XXXX's brain scans reveal heightened activity in the auditory and language centers of the brain and no other reactions recorded.

Footnotes

« SCP-XXXW | SCP-XXXX | SCP-XXXY »


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DATE: 29 Apr 2021 01:35
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Item #: SCP-481-J

Object Class: Euclid

Special Containment Procedures: All discovered instances of SCP-481-J are to be kept within a high-security storage locker at Site-19 and are not to be interacted with. Any and all testing regarding SCP-481-J is strictly forbidden. Upon securing an SCP-481-J instance, the instance is to be cremated entirely after a one (1) week isolation period. If an SCP-481-J instance is worn or interacted with within five (5) days of being secured, the subject interacting with the instance is to be terminated on sight.

Description: SCP-481-J is a pair of Black Tundra sunglasses, upon discovery however, will appear to be iced over in a crystal-like material resembling diamond. SCP-481-J instances have been discovered on shelves in supermarkets and malls disguised amongst other pairs of sunglasses. When SCP-481-J instances are transported to commercial stores and shopping locations, all vehicles transporting the instance(s) are to be interfered and all persons are to be apprehended. Upon removing the SCP-481-J instances from the vehicle of transportation, the instances must be isolated for one (1) week, allowing the material to melt and rendering them safe to wear.

If a person touches an SCP-481-J instance, the person will experience a severe stinging pain on the region of contact. The pain will last an approximate 15 minutes before waning entirely.

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« SCP-XXXW | SCP-XXXX | SCP-XXXY »


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DATE: 29 Apr 2021 00:17

SCP-XXXX - Dead Man’s Switch

Clearance level: Level 3 - Confidential

Containment class: Euclid

Disruption class: Dark

Risk class: Caution

Special Containment Procedures: SCP-XXXX is to be kept in a standard humanoid cell at Site-88. The cell must be guarded by at least two(2) guards at all times, only medical personnel are allowed within SCP-XXXX’s cell.

Due to its advanced age, a life support system must be connected to SCP-XXXX at all times. At least one team of medical personnel must be on stand-by in the event that SCP-XXXX experiences a sudden shift in its health. When entering SCP-XXXX’s cell personnel must be wearing noise cancelling gear.

All testing on SCP-XXXX has been suspended indefinitely by order of O5.

Description: SCP-XXXX appears to be a human male of Caucasian descent with an estimated age of ███. SCP-XXXX has a symbol of unknown origin tattooed on the back of it’s neck. Several features of SCP-XXXX are in a state of mild decay including the arms, legs, and face. Due to this, SCP-XXXX is immobile and bed-ridden.

Despite SCP-XXXX’s frail state, it is capable of vocalization, many of which are incomprehensible. However a small number of these vocalizations are memetic hazards. These symptoms will manifest approximately 48 hours and include extreme paranoia, violent outbursts and [REDACTED], culminating in the limbs of the victim to decay.

+ for O5 Command Only

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DATE: 28 Apr 2021 21:01
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Mapa provisional de los universos Hub afectados por SCP-6000, junto con una posible área de efecto.

Ítem #: SCP-6000

Clasificación del Objeto: Keter

Procedimientos Especiales de Contención: Actualmente, no hay forma conocida de prevenir que SCP-6000 entre en contacto con nuestro universo.3 La investigación pertinente a la naturaleza de SCP-6000, y a cualquier manera de evitarlo o neutralizarlo, es una de las prioridades principales de la Fundación.

La comunicación y/o viajes interdimensionales entre U-6KES1 y los universos afectados por SCP-6000 deben ser autorizados mediante una votación del Consejo O5. En el caso de serlo, los involucrados deberán aprobar un examen de resistencia memética con por lo menos el 98%, además de portar una Boya de Realidad Scranton4 en todo momento.

Las incursiones a universos afectados por SCP-6000 no deberán durar más de seis horas consecutivas; se alienta al personal involucrado a cumplir con la misión en cuestión lo más pronto posible, con el fin de minimizar el riesgo de contagio de SCP-6000. Todos los objetos recuperados, asimismo como los sujetos que vuelvan, deberán ser sometidos a una cuarentena de 15 días dentro de una Guillotina de Scranton.

Al momento de redactar este documento, la Fundación ha logrado establecer contacto con cuatro iteraciones aparentemente amistosas de la misma, así como con tres organizaciones equivalentes; se espera que el esfuerzo conjunto logre acelerar la investigación sobre SCP-6000.

Descripción: SCP-6000 es la designación para una anomalía metafísica altamente propagada a lo largo del Multiverso conocido. Los efectos de SCP-6000 consisten en la alteración irregular y presumiblemente aleatoria de la realidad, causando la ocurrencia de eventos que por lo general son considerados infantiles, inútiles o ridículos por las personas ajenas al universo afectado. Algunos ejemplos de los eventos ocasionados por SCP-6000 son:

  • Inserte ejemplo
  • La creación de una organización equivalente a la Fundación cuyo objetivo consiste en golpear tiburones, autonombrada "Shark Punching Center".5
  • Una serie de sucesos mediante los cuales SCP-999 adquirió una fuerza y resistencia física aumentada, además de la capacidad de hablar, ahora presentándose como un hombre corpulento de mediana edad.

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DATE: 28 Apr 2021 20:59

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DATE: 28 Apr 2021 20:43

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Item #: SCP-XXXX

Object Class:

Special Containment Procedures:

Description:

Discovery:

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« SCP-XXXW | SCP-XXXX | SCP-XXXY »

‡ Licensing / Citation

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DATE: 28 Apr 2021 20:36

Agent Daniels Personal File.

"…"

Why aren't I dead?

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DATE: 28 Apr 2021 20:15

Jade: Hourglass Dolphin




Feild Report: Jade was following the boat today like she always does, told me that Terrence and herself had been playing tag, she won, of course, she did. I was able to replace her false fin with little problem, still finds it hard to hold still after all this time.

Audio Snippet

Jade: Kelly! Hey Kelly, guess what Kelly!

Kelly: Oh, Jade, what is it?

Jade: Terrence and I, we played a game today, it was so fun!

Kelly: A game, what sort of game was that?

Jade: It's the one you told me about last week, I think you called it tag, we played it all day!

Kelly: That's wonderful Jade, did you have fun?

Jade: Yes! Yes, I did, I won! I won, every time, Terrence couldn't out swim me!



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DATE: 28 Apr 2021 19:37

Baxter: Bull Sea Lion




Feild Report: Visited Baxter on the eastern side of the island today, he was okay, well that's what he said anyway, he was happy to see me and had a lot of questions, I couldn't answer all of them, but I think he knows that. Baxter's medical didn't show any signs of immediate concern.

Audio Snippet

Baxter: Kelly? Is that you, did you bring fish?

Kelly: Is that all you ever do, let your stomach do the thinking, and yes it is me, and yes I have fish, here you go lazy.

Baxter: I'm not lazy. I'm just conserving energy. I happen to have a lot of energy to conserve as a matter of fact

Kelly: Yeah, yeah, why don't you go for a swim or something.

Baxter: Hmph, I don't think I have had enough fish to even consider such a thing

Kelly: Move it, now, or no more fish.

Baxter: Fine, sheesh, keep your hair on, I was going to get in eventually anyway


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