Urielleth

A Lover’s Embrace

The following is a collection of draft material for an SCP I’m currently working on, with the WIP title, “A Lover’s Embrace”

Ideas Critique Draft

Here is the draft for the SCP requesting greenlight to be posted to the Ideas Critique Forum.

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Seeking Greenlights: Yes

Page Type: SCP Article

Genre: Horror

+ Elevator Pitch

Comprised of two stone humanoid females, both instances levitate above the ground and orbit around a centrifugal point at opposite ends.
They are capable of human locomotion and speech, however they cannot deviate from their orbit.
Seemingly they desire a completely benevolent utopia, an “empathetic environment”
In interviews, their co-operation is based on the individual they speak to, specifically their capacity to feel love and empathy.
When angered, they will accelerate and expand their orbit, capable of breaching containment by smashing through any material they come into contact with, they can also manipulate the centre of their orbit as a means to move around.

+ Central Narrative

Recovered from an island in the Bering Strait after reports of a strange superbolide near the east coast of Russia.
Found locked in an embrace and transported to Site-XX, where the instances began orbiting by the edges of their containment cell.
Eventually a site-wide breach was caused by the SCP, causing the detonation of the on-site warheads; unscathed, the SCP was transported to another site and its containment was reestablished with help from a program which provides them with the “love” they desire through the blood of empathetic individuals.

+ Hook/Attention-Grabber

SCP-XXXX is an extreme threat to humanity, a reckoning, that some might
say we deserve.
Our immanent cause for alarm from
SCP-XXXX is due to our nature, not the nature of the SCP.
The notion that we would rather let it consume gallons of human blood, siphoned from a dangerous and unreliable scheme than just be “better” people is the irony that SCP-XXXX wants the foundation to understand.
As humans, this utopian state SCP-XXXX desires from us is considered unobtainable, throwing us into a strange stalemate, with the fate of the world hanging in the balance.

Additional Notes:
Thanks for reading! This was a huge rewrite of an idea I had posted on an account I no longer have access to, I hope that’s not much of a problem
The aforementioned program/scheme for the SCPs containment involves a Specialised site specific to the SCP, thusly it would be included in a containment section of the full article, however, should the site be described in the article itself or should I look into writing a Site Dossier for it to be cross-linked with? I’d love to know!

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If you’re here from the IRC Chatrooms, thank you for reading and please be honest with your criticism, though remember this is an Ideas Critique draft, many details are left out for the sake of the concise format.
However if you’re just genuinely curious, I’d be happy to answer any questions about the SCP.