Yellowislol-Copypasta

For usage when conveying concept thoughts

I specifically liked this section because X, but this section needs work because of Y

Format for crit idea

Heyo, it's YellowISlol from "The Furretsidence", and ima be dropping a crit today!

The Crit!

Okay, lets start with what you did right:

Now, lets look at what needs improvement:

Finally, lets look at what simply needs change:

Anyways, hope this is helpful!

~Yellow

Same thing but for drafts lmao

Heyo, it's YellowISlol from "The Furretsidence", and ima be dropping a crit today!

The Crit!

To start, some LBL:

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Okay, lets start with what you did right:

Now, lets look at what needs improvement:

Finally, lets look at what simply needs change:

Anyways, hope this is helpful!

~Yellow

link to naveli copypasta

http://firedawnfolder.wikidot.com/naveil-s-copypasta-conservatoire

Heyo, it's [[*user YellowISlol]] from "The Furretsidence", and ima be dropping a crit today!

[[collapsible show="The Crit!" hide="I mean, what did you expect, legos?"]]

Okay, lets start with what you did //right//:

Now, lets look at what needs //improvement//:

Finally, lets look at what simply //needs change//:

[[/collapsible]]

Anyways, hope this is helpful!

~Yellow

Heyo, it's [[*user YellowISlol]] from "The Furretsidence", and ima be dropping a crit today!

[[collapsible show="The Crit!" hide="I mean, what did you expect, legos?"]]

To start, some LBL:

-----

Okay, lets start with what you did //right//:

Now, lets look at what needs //improvement//:

Finally, lets look at what simply //needs change//:

[[/collapsible]]

Anyways, hope this is helpful!

~Yellow